Yah! Yah! I finally made it. I am a UBC Champion. I registered in the nick of time for the challenge and the thought of making a novella, with Orkut as the backdrop flashed at the back of the mind. It was my way way to pay tribute to Orkut, my first love, who will soon be history. I was apprehensive since doing 31 chapters on 31 Days for a novella was quite a task. I know, the novella is not best seller stuffs but at least a start. It's fraught with mistakes and grammar confusion. Still, I am happy to live up to the challenge. My first ever novella, spanning over 31 days, on the blog.
Today is the final Day, Day 31: The novella 'An Orkut Love Story' is linked to Ultimate Blog Challenge for July 2014
An Orkut Love Story:
CHAPTER 31:
We’ve been drinking inside Uncle Vijay’s room and he faked
fever to Swagata, oblivious of the happening inside the room. The clock struck
midnight. Vijay uncle dumps me out of his room filled with cigarette smell and out
pouring of alcohol.
I traipse towards Swagata’s room, holding a candle in my
hand and slowly open the door. It’s dark inside. I can sense she is fast
asleep, curled on the bed. I can’t help feeling the frantic heart-beat..dil
dhadakne do! (Let the heart beat). After all, we will see each other after ages.
Not in my wildest fantasy, I would imagine we would meet like that.
‘You are what fairy
tales princesses are made of’
‘You sleep like a cute
baby’
‘Your angelic smile makes me want to fall in
love over and over again with you’
‘Independent, incurable
romantic who can feel the beauty and pain of love’
‘Your belief in our
love makes you the most beautiful person on earth’
‘I promise to love you
forever, take you to the gates of heaven’
‘I shall hold your
hands till old age, narrate our love stories to our grand-children’
‘My love for you is
like the vast ocean, Swagata De’
I hear someone making a slight movement on the bed, trying
to slowly push out of the bed. I hold the candle right in front of her face.
“You?!” She is bewildered. “Shit! I got so scared, thinking
a thief erupted inside the room or some ghost is lurking around.
I smile. “If you reject my proposal, I will turn into a
lovable ghost and haunt you forever.”
“But! How you got inside the room? Did you climb? Has
anybody seen you?,” She asks with a frightened face.
I put my finger on her lip. “Don’t say anything. Vijay told
me everything and he took me here. Swagata, I love you. Will you marry me?,” I
propose.
“Aisa koi propose karta hai kya (This is how someone
proposes),” she asks with a sheepish smile.
“I don’t know any other way. Don’t worry about Tarun. Vijay
told me everything.”
“Yeah, such a big asshole. It’s Vijay uncle, by the way.”
“Arre yaar! I recited a poem for you. A gift for you.” I
give her the CD.”
“Wow! I can’t believe it. You are proposing to me with a CD
of Amitabh Bachchan holding a gun in Ek Ajnabee. You are mad. It seems that I
must teach you romance.”
Swagata opens the CD box and a red rose falls on her feet. She
reads the note inside, ‘Listen to song no.3.’
She puts the CD in the lap top. The romantic song starts
playing, ‘Tere liye Mere Sanson mujhe tum se pyar hai.’ She hugs me, her hands
pressed on her face and tears rolling down on her cheek. “I love you too, Mr
Karan. Will you marry me?”
I bend on my knee to kiss her hand, “I do, Swagata. I
promise to love you, forever.”
Swagata face beams. “Hey! Let’s go on Orkut and flirt
shamelessly like in the old days.”
It was my turn to protest, “Swagata, not now.”
She makes a face. “Please, please, please,” She pleads. “One
last time, baby.”
We log in to see a message flashing, ‘We regret to inform
you that Orkut is now closed.’
We made faces. Uncle Vijay joins
us, singing, ‘Le Jayenge Le Jayenge, Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Jayenge.’ The three
of us tightly embrace each other.
GOA
The calm water and gentle breeze
flutter our hair as we walk, hand in hand at Palolem Beach, Goa. It’s midnight.
Not a soul could be spotted on the beach. There is a sense of serenity as timid
waves swoosh during the night and we steal innocent kiss, leisurely plodding
our steps on the sand. It’s a beautiful and silent night.
We walk back to our shack. “Coffee,
I ask?”
Swagata teases me, “Dunno, whether
I should try your coffee.”
“Try me out, baby. I mean my
coffee.”
“You are very metro-sexual,” she
gets naughty, running her fingers on my chest.
“I am only sexual.”
We kiss each other and make
intimate love. We are a newly engaged couple, dying to get married in three
months here at Palolem Beach and planning for a huge red-designed Orkut logo.
The End.
11 comments:
Nice end to the story! Congratulations on completing the challenge :)
Congratulations! you made it! you should be proud of yourself.
Thanks loads Reema. I feel so relieved when I hit publish last night. Finally done. Congrats to you, too:)
Hi Amaia, congrats to u. Feeling happy and relieved. Thanks for the kind words:)
This was so well written, I really enjoyed it. I feel like I need to read the other chapters, though!
Congrats Vishal for completing the challenge successfully! It takes a lot of dedication for UBC! :)
The post is well written; being a positive person myself, I loved the positive end!
Thanks Sophia for the kind words. Congrats to u, too and glad u liked the last chapter.
Thanks Aayesha for liking it. Finally, I am relieved for completing the challenge and, of course, the novella:)
Vishal congratulations on completing the UBC Challenge. I have to spare some time to read your novella.. will do so soon. Keep up the good work :)
Very filmy indeed :)
I also like happy endings!
Great going, V
Wishing you more success!
Lovely novella. Nice story. I had fun reading it. Congrats on finishing the UBC :)
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