Day 30: This post is written as a novella, 'An Orkut Love Story' for the prompt, Ultimate Blog Challenge for July 2014.
CHAPTER 30:
September 30, 2014
I walk inside the boisterous café Leopold, swarmed by the
typical South Mumbai crowd, hip n hop local and foreign alike. I scout for Vijay
Uncle but there is no sign of him. I settle at the right corner, close to the
entrance door, facing the horde of hawkers selling fake branded stuffs. I order
a King Fisher Strong beer and lit a cigarette.
A tall, bespectacled man in his 40s, wearing Dolce and Gabbana
tee and Blue Denims, approaches me, ‘Karan?” I nod. He offers me a tight
handshake, introducing himself as ‘Vijay.’ I was expecting to meet an old man,
nearing 60 plus but Vijay uncle tells me that he is the younger brother of
Swagata’s Mum. We order a huge beer pitcher and it didn’t take long for our
conversation to veer towards Swagata.
He opens his laptop and asks, “Log on your Orkut account.
Remember, today is September 30. It’s the last day to hang on Orkut and
tomorrow, it will be buried in history.” He eyes me, “Okay, transfer your precious
document to Google drive. I already saved Swagata’s stuffs on Orkut. Both of
you have made history by falling in love on Orkut and high time to take things
to the next level. Make it a symbolic
Orkut love story.”
“But, Vijay, Swagata is engaged to
Tarun,” I protest.
“We called off the engagement. This idiot was two-timing her
with other women. But, listen, it’s quite a story,” Vijay Uncle pats me on the
back.
“Tarun is obsessed with him own image and nurture the false
impression that he can buy Swagata’s love by the power of money. You know what
asshole was doing? If Swagata stops at the mall to gush about a sexy dress,
Tarun would force her to accept it as gift. If she needs to go somewhere, he
would order a brand new car that would land at her door step. The ass was
forcing gifts down her throat. Once, they were on a date and Swagata was
telling that she is planning to get herself a new I-phone, well, you can take a
guess. Designer shoes, expensive watches and air tickets would land at her door
steps.
Few girls walk inside Leopold. Vijay winks at me, “Hot
chicks, na. Dude! That’s the perk of being a bachelor at 40.” He gulps his
beer. “I am very close to my niece. I know her too well to say that she cannot
live without you. Tarun was suffocating her with his obsession. I knew, right
in the beginning, that something was not normal and got some men to follow this
fool. He was playing the same game with not one but several girls. We caught
him red handed.”
“This bastard is so
shameless that she asked Swagata to give back all his gifts. I slapped
him..bloody chutiya,” Vijay uncle suddenly became all charged.
Tomorrow is Sunday and Swagata will be home all night. We will
sneak inside the house and, at midnight, you just pop inside the room to
surprise her on Orkut’s last day. It’s time to fall in love all over again. We
clink glasses and drink merrily.
13 comments:
Yep and your writing fits also with the saying ~ Blogging is the new poetry of our time!
Beautifully written chapter again! Thank you :)
Awwww this is so romantic..well written :)
Hmmm,m...that's a hell of a story
@Donna: Thank u so much. I had doubts on the quality of the post and wasn't very sure how it will be liked. Your words, blogging is the new poetry, is our energy boost. Comment stimulating my creative side:)
@Ananya: Welcome here and thanks loads for the lovely words.
@Chaitali: Thanks for visiting and yeah, hehe, I am trying to keep it light with some drama:)
Wow nice.... Waiting for the last chapter :)
Touching to recall and make Orkut's last day memorable. Indeed thats something - every Orkut user to plan and make it special.
That is sweet! Although I am not in touch with the past stories, but it seems quite interesting to go through the previous chapters! Great write!
@Reema: Guess, you already read it. Hope u enjoy the chapters read::)
@Viyoma:Ya it was the tube light moment and why not make an Orkut love story? Happy I did. It was tiring, no doubt.
For sure, on September 30 I'll be right there, relishing those moments:)
Thanks Umang for visiting and enjoying this chapter:)
OMG! So romantic! Wonderfully written, Vishal!
I'm sure Orkut must be feeling very special! :D
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