I am participating in 100 Words on Saturday-7, a prompt provided by Sugandha of Shades of Life (http://somethings-sugandha.blogspot.in) on writetribe.com. I am penning a short story on the prompt, 'I knew It was My Last Day There and hope you like it.
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I Knew It Was My Last Day ThereHordes of relatives and friends thronged to catch a final glimpse
as I sat among them in the hall. The mood was sober and some shed a tear or
two. I smiled as I remember the day I was born and as I grow up, my parents
held my tiny hands to make me walk. I felt a tinge of sadness when I saw the
friends I made in college, my first crush and kiss. They carried me on their
shoulders in my last journey. I smiled and bade the last farewell to them. I knew it was my last day there.
16 comments:
Very nice and a good take on the prompt.
:( Sad one.
Profound!
Oh! he was an aatma. A good take Vishal. :)
Lovely take on the prompt, am sure nobody expected someone dead to be the protagonist of this post
@Kalpana: Thank you so much for liking the post.
take a walk in the woods: It's sad but I thought bout speaking from the soul point of view
@Sunita: Thanks a ton
@Shilpa: Yes! Indeed, he was an aatma and thanks a lot.
@Jairam:hehe! I took so many by surprise, na and I'm happy u like it.The soul speaks and reflects on life, na:)
oh! That's just sad.. :(
Beautiful take on the prompt
Wow, this was so poignant. Absolutely brilliant! ♥
@Pixie: Thank you so much and in a way, it's sad. The departed soul:)
@Kathy: You made my day and am so happy you liked it:)
the journey ...the final one...with so many half baked dreams,half done chores....
exactly my thoughts on the prompt! nice read.
good take on the prompt
@Titli: I am so glad our ideas converged and that's what I call, Karmic connection.
@Confused Humanity: Love the way you've described everything..life and dreams are half-baked. Tanku:)
@Ruchira: Thank u sooo, much:)
Sad.. Gives a feeling of things left undone.
Hmm...Vishal. So u hv already imagined hw ur last journey will look like. Good.
Hope u have learnt to embrace life. Read today's speaking tree in Times of India.
It's bitter truth indeed...Nice take on the prompt
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